Persuasive writing improvements

Think of your own persuasive writing and look at some of your own examples.
– What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece?
– Which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that?
– What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better?

18 thoughts on “Persuasive writing improvements

  1. I put emotive words it. I think my animals should not be ketp in cages is the best because its got strong words in it. Make it strong.

  2. I do well using grammer (full stops, commers and capital letters)
    My best persuasive piece so far would be ‘Should mobile phones be banned at school’
    Bigger Paragraphs, more egsamples and more infomation

  3. – What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece?
    I’m pretty shore every time I do a persuasive writing are the argument’s and I use some of the emotive words.
    – Which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that?
    I think my best one was STOP SMOKING because I got a lot done, I really like the first arguments because I write what’s in the cigarettes and what it does to you.

    – What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better?
    Do a cohesion.

  4. I used some emotive words and a really strong hook in I also tried to engage the reader by putting a question in. my best piece is on should people smoke because it has really strong words and a great hook in that I think is the best yet.
    I could use more persuasive devises and do two or more paragraphs.

  5. Well I think that I had put alot of detail in my persuasive piece of writing, I have used just a little bit of support to make the detail better but my support includes connections, or what does actually happen. I try my best to think of a long introduction, I also think I put in very detailed hook-ins with my introduction, I have put in synonyms to replace boring and dull words.
    I think that my best persuasive piece is the graffiti one. The title asks “should graffiti be illegal?”. I know it’s not my best title but it includes alot of emotive words, I have put in alot of synonyms so it makes the piece of writing more interesting, and of course I have put in a hook-in so that the reader does not throw the piece of writing away.
    I think that I can improve on putting in more synonyms because lately I have been using a bit more dull words, I could put in more emotive words so it doesn’t sound plain. I could put in more detail so that the reader thinks that my piece sounds great. I could really improve on putting in better titles, because lately they have been plain and boring.

  6. Persuasive writing improvements
    May 2.
    – What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece? I think during writing my persuasive pieces I do well at using emotive words, adjectives, punctuation and other strong language. I also believe I do well structuring out my work correctly and putting the right arguments in the right places!
    – Which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that? I think my graffiti piece is my best so far because it has been through all of the writing procedure, ticks all the persuasive checklist goals, has good arguments with lots of emotive words and clearly states my opinion!
    – What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better? I think I could give more/better examples and put some more arguments/information in. I could also use some more persuasive devices in my work to engage the reader some more!

  7. Think of your own persuasive writing and look at some of your own examples.
    – What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece? I think that I done well on my persuasive piece is that I try to use stronger words.

    – Which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that? I think that my best persuasive piece is graffiti should be legal because I think I used stronger words in it.

    – What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better? I would use better words and stronger words, no boring words to make your work better.

  8. I try to make my work well by trying to make my writing sound interesting by using powerful words and bold words.
    My best writing piece would be Should animals be kept in cages/captivity because it really interesting
    I think by making it much more better.

  9. – What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece?
    I think the most things I do in persuasive pieces is actually done I never leave a piece of writing un-finished.
    – Which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that?
    I think my best is my animals should be kept in cages because there is a great introduction and I was on task all the time.
    – What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better?
    I could of used more emotive words and another paragraph.

  10. -What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece?
    My best paragraph that we have to do is my introduction because it’s simple to do, with the examples and questions you use in an introduction.
    -Which persuasive piece do you think is your best piece so far and why do you think that?
    Animals should be kept in captivity because I used most of the strongest words I possibly could!

  11. – What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece?
    I have to write a intro then after that we have to do three arguments and some examples
    And then a conclusion and then you reread your writing and then you should get a check list and then you get someone to read it.
    – Which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that?
    I think the Australia flag from last term.
    – What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better?
    I could put some more emotive words and arguments.

  12. I think that I didn’t have that much emotive word in my persuasive paces. I think that I put a lot of effete in some of my work but I think I need to do more.

  13. 1. What do you do when writing a persasive piece?
    Have emotive words, sometimes bold letters and always a hook-in.
    2. which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that?
    I believe that my should graffiti be illegal or leagal because I have emotive words.
    3. What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better?
    I need better arugments and m,ore bolded words.

  14. -What do you do well in a persuasive piece?

    When I am writing a persuasive piece of writing I am trying to make a really amazing hook in that has emotive words and I also try to make my arguments have evidence that can back up my evidence so than my arguments are persuasive. In my writing I try to interest the readers that read my convincing arguments. I think that the things that I do to my persuasive piece of writing are improving bit by bit so than I can know what to do and all the things a grade six should be doing in a persuasive piece of writing.

    -Which persuasive piece do you think is your best so far?

    I think that my “Children Should play sports” persuasive piece is my best one so far because this piece has more emotive words to describe the persuasive piece more. The piece was more interesting than my other ones because this piece had really descriptive arguments that were really descriptive. My hook in was really interesting and that the people that read it will enjoy reading my piece. I think that my best piece will always be really interesting to the readers because when people read things that are really descriptive and interesting they will want to read it some more to see how interesting it gets in the middle of the persuasive piece of writing.

    -What are some things you can do to make your persuasive piece better?

    I think that because my best piece of writing has a lot of persuasive things and emotive word that I would need to put more persuasive information and more emotive words into my other persuasive pieces of writing so than people get more interested in my other writings that are really are really amazing. I think that I will need to add more thinking to my arguments because in my other persuasive pieces of writing there aren’t that much information or evidence to back up my arguments because most of my arguments need more evidence and sentences to make my arguments beiger and better. I think that I would need to make my conclusions more better be summing my arguments up into a paragraph that was summed up to make my conclusion better than my old conclusions that I would put in my work to try and make it better.

    Author: Nyetap Ruach

  15. My work by Nyetap Ruach
    -What do you do well in a persuasive piece?
    When I am writing a persuasive piece of writing I am trying to make a really amazing hook in that has emotive words and I also try to make my arguments have evidence that can back up my evidence so than my arguments are persuasive. In my writing I try to interest the readers that read my convincing arguments. I think that the things that I do to my persuasive piece of writing are improving bit by bit so than I can know what to do and all the things a grade six should be doing in a persuasive piece of writing.

    -Which persuasive piece do you think is your best so far?
    I think that my “Children Should play sports” persuasive piece is my best one so far because this piece has more emotive words to describe the persuasive piece more. The piece was more interesting than my other ones because this piece had really descriptive arguments that were really descriptive. My hook in was really interesting and that the people that read it will enjoy reading my piece. I think that my best piece will always be really interesting to the readers because when people read things that are really descriptive and interesting they will want to read it some more to see how interesting it gets in the middle of the persuasive piece of writing.

    -What are some things you can do to make your persuasive piece better?
    I think that because my best piece of writing has a lot of persuasive things and emotive word that I would need to put more persuasive information and more emotive words into my other persuasive pieces of writing so than people get more interested in my other writings that are really are really amazing. I think that I will need to add more thinking to my arguments because in my other persuasive pieces of writing there aren’t that much information or evidence to back up my arguments because most of my arguments need more evidence and sentences to make my arguments bigger and better. I think that I would need to make my conclusions more better be summing my arguments up into a paragraph that was summed up to make my conclusion better than my old conclusions that I would put in my work to try and make it better.

    Sorry I am posting again because I just picked up some mistakes that I have made in this writing improvement.

    Author: Nyetap Ruach

  16. – What do you do well when writing a persuasive piece?
    I put lots of emotive words in my persuasive pieces, I put very descriptive words in my persuasive pieces, I put correct punctuation, for example comers, full stops, sentences that make sense. I put correct spelling in my persuasive pieces, I put evidence and facts in my persuasive pieces.

    -Which persuasive piece do you think is your best one so far and why do you think that?
    I believe that my save the orang-utans and all children should play sport because they both have an extreme amount of emotive and descriptive words, both pieces have detailed hook-ins, arguments with evidence and conclusions.

    – What are some things you could do to make your persuasive writing better?
    I can make my persuasive pieces better by putting more support/evidence on my arguments.

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