7 thoughts on “Persuasive Writing Samples

  1. Well done Zach for extending your persuasive piece and Turing into a better piece of writing. I think you have put in better sentences, used more emotive words and put in a lot more detail. Well done!
    You did a great job Shani, I see that you have put in a lot of detail in the writing, you have put in capital words so it points out what you really mean BUT, I didn’t see any opinion in your introduction. But still, well done.

    1. But yes, Shani I did see your opinion in your first paragraph, but you maybe should’ve put it in the introduction.

  2. Wow that’s better work than mine. I like the way you explained everything in detail and didn’t slide of topic. Great Work. WELL DONE SHANI. Maybe Zach….. πŸ˜›

  3. Shani, I really like the way that you convinced me that animals shouldn’t be kept in cages. good job πŸ™‚

  4. This is really persuasive!! I love them. it looks like you have both tried hard and it paid off. Well done!

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