We have looked at writing complex sentences,which are very powerful and creative.
An example is from Margaret Wild’s story called ‘The Fox.’
…In the evening, when the air is creamy with blossom, dog and magpie relax at the mouth of the cave, enjoying each other’s company.
My example, using the the same sentence structure, was from a personal experience I had on the weekend.
…During the afternoon, when the sun was brightly shining down, we kayaked around the huge deserted lake, paddling effortlessly through the calm and glistening water.
Can you please post your examples of complex sentences as a comment and remember your next challenge is to start using these types of sentences in your own writing. This will be due by this Thursday (16-5-2013). You are able to post more than one sentence too.