Jay’s Big Foot 100 Word Challenge

One frightening and miserable morning, when the touch of the smooth and gentle wind brushed past me, I was horrified to see a gigantic footprint rush past my eyes, thinking where this monstrous beast came from.
I could feel the warm tingle of blood stream through me. The footprint was as massive as a vicious grown dinosaur. The gigantic footprints were making my eyes surprisingly glare. Mystery was gliding past my cold nose, as I smell something awfully suspicious. I am shockingly curious like a spotty cheetah stalking its prey. It’s a terrifyingly suspicious mystery that I’ll disappointingly never know.

Author: Jay M

5 thoughts on “Jay’s Big Foot 100 Word Challenge

  1. Hi Jay,

    Thank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I enjoyed reading your writing. You have used some super vocabulary in your writing, I love how you have described the wind as brushing past you. You have also used a great simile.

    Well done!
    Mrs Stones

  2. WOW, I really liked reading your 100 word challenge, I thought it was fantastic and I found the descriptive work really fantastic. I think that the hard work that you put in your one hundred word challenge is really amazing. You have really great similes that are in your piece.

  3. Wow Jay I liked the complex sentences of your 100 word challenge and your powerful words and the way that you set it out. I think that you will get better at the 100 word challenge keep up the good work!

  4. I think I did a great job. I think I put in a lot of emotive words and adjectives. I liked my little complex sentence I had at the start. Next time I could maybe put in more synonyms, and more smiles.

  5. Wow jay I really liked reading your 100 word challenge, I thought it was your best 100 challenge it was fantastic and I found the reading really good and fantastic. I think that the hard work that you had put in your one 100 word challenge is really Excetllend You have really fantastic similes that are in your piece. Well done jay

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