Tahlia’s 100 Word Challenge – As the train entered the tunnel…

The Tunnel
I can sense something is wrong… As the train entered the dark tunnel, no-one could hear anything except the constant clattering from the train. We were going faster and faster as the train seemed like it was travelling out of control. Passengers were panicking, screaming with fear and holding on to the bars in the carriage so they don’t lose their balance. The carriage is shaking like a massive earthquake as I feel the train suddenly derail and darkness overtakes. I hold my breath and hope for the best as I hear the train begin to crash into the side of the tunnel.
By Tahlia

One thought on “Tahlia’s 100 Word Challenge – As the train entered the tunnel…

  1. What an amazing sense of tension and impending doom you’ve managed to conjur in this 100WC Tahlia. I felt as though I was in the train with your character, also fearful for what fate has in store. Your choice of vocabulary helps the reader form an image of the scene, but you weaved it together to provide a sense of pace equal to that which is unfolding in the story.
    Loved it!

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