Homework: persuasive writing – class party

During the past week, I’ve had some students ask for a class party.

Well, here is your chance.

Your homework task is to persuade me to have or not have a class party before the end of term.

You must complete a persuasive piece, that is structured with an introduction (hook in and opinion), a body (3 strongly supported arguments) and a concluding statement.

Remember to use lots of powerful language such as synonyms, emotive words, adjectives, etc.

You may write your persuasive piece as a comment or hand write it.

The homework will be due Tuesday 3rd of September.

I look forward to reading your arguments.

11 thoughts on “Homework: persuasive writing – class party

  1. Class parties are fantastically joyfull occasions. They are events that help us take a break from tiring work. Please give us a class party for my following reasons.

    First of all, Mr. Andrews, class parties are one of the most spectacular gifts to have at schools. You get to eat delicious food, play fantastic games, and hang out with your extremely best friends. It is a time where we get to celebrate all of the superb work that us students have produced. So it’s basically a boring-less day with absolutely nothing to wonderfully worry about. Mr. Andrew, please don’t let us happy students be let down by your negativeness.

    Secondly, we have had a whole entire term, which we have devastatingly filled in with only work and inquiry. Doing massive amounts of work each day, which can be boring, as there’s some things that we’ve already learned about can be tiring. We need at least one marvellous day to celebrate all of our great efforts that we have put into our work. Work is very hard, and is very fearful because we don’t know what’s coming next. At least one excellent day without work, and with fun can’t hurt.

    Finally, it gives the class a chance to socialise. We only get to talk at recess and lunch time and it’ll be nice to have the chance to have fun with my classmates. Socialising is better than sitting there, being restricted to be quiet and working.

    Please Mr.Andrew, don’t let us down on this important subject. It’s one of the biggest things someone looks forward to the whole, and sleepy term.

  2. Do you want the children of 5/6A to be dull and bored and not want to go to school because they only do maths science, reading and writing in our exacter time from P.E ART I.C.T AUSLAN? I believe that 5/6A deserves to have a class party for all our hard work.
    Firstly I believe that 5/6A deserves a class party because 5/6A works very hard and also because whenever you are away or doing something and a teacher takes over we always behave ourselves because we want to get a reward for our behaviour.
    Next I believe that 5/6A deserves a class party because most of us kids in our grade don’t want to go to school because they think that school is dull and boring and that they never have fun things in the classroom.
    Lastly I believe that 5/6A deserves a class party because some students don’t have a very big social life and this might help children to know what students like and enjoy because some students are shy and don’t like to speech to students unless other students speech to them and it will help because we can’t speech in class and can’t find them outside.
    So please Mr Andrew please can we have a class party for these reason we get dull and bored and don’t want to go to school, we behave perfectly when a teacher takes over when you are away or doing something else and also because some students are shy and need to have someone to speech to someone and it will help because we can’t speech in class and can’t find them outside.

  3. Introduction: Do you want our class to not have a class party for the rest of the year and let your wonderful students be sad and deprest for the whole long and boring year, I believe that our class should have a costume dress up class party.

    Argument 1: I believe that our class deserves a costume dress up class party because we work extremely hard, we have be quiet In the class (most of the time), we have behaved in the class, in art, in P.E, in ICT, in maths rotations and the emergency teaches in our class when you are busy and we treat every student and every teacher with trust, tone and respect.

    Argument 2: I believe that our class needs a costume dress up class party because We have looked after out class, we have cleaned our class, we have cleaned after our selfs and we do so much for Mr. Andrew and help him.

    Argument 3: I believe that our class should have a fun and exsiting costume class party because it would be fantastic to spend a whole day having fun with your friends in class and it would be nice to do an awesome and fun day With the best male teacher EVER!!!

    Conclusion: I believe that our class should have a costume dress up party because we have done some much for Mr. Andrew so it’s about time that he should do something for use, our class knows that Mr. Andrew Wants a class party too so MR. ANDREW YOU HAVE TO GIVE YOUR CLASS A COSTUME DRESS UP CLASS ROOM PARTY FOR THOS TERM!

    Author: Shani Haar

  4. I think that we should have a class party because there are fantastic wonderful food that you love to eat

    I believe that you love food that we bring for a class party and I think we should have a class party because the food is magnificent to eat.

    If we have a class party people we enjoy eating things that they love to eat and everyone will have a fantastic time eating wonderful things while everyone eats.

    How ever your family will get to eat to and you will have fun and we will have a great and magnificent time.

    Conclusion:
    It will be great to have a class party and it will be fantastic to eat wonderful food and enjoy the day.

    Author: Cody

  5. Do you want all the children of 5/6 A to be dull and unhappy? Then give us a class party!

    Firstly, the children of 5/6 A are starting to get reckless, their trying their best to not show it and put up with it. They are waiting to be rewarded. I agree that playing silent ball is a reward and it is fun, but they just want 2 hours to party and hang out with their friends.

    Secondly, if you don’t throw a class party most of he students will lose their patience and their work rate will deteriorate and we will not get as much things done that are expected, and they will have to stay in recces and lunch, and when they have to do that they will start to get extremely angry and not come to school or they might want to go to another school.

    Finally, everyone deserves to relax especially that we are under a lot pressure to get everything done for inquiry, concert and school.

    In conclusion, I challenge you Mr A to give our class a class party to ease the tension. I challenge you to give our students the reward for the hard work they have put in these three terms. I challenge you to help keep the standard of work that we do.

    Author: Logan Flynn Of 5/6A

  6. : Why we should have a class party:
    Do you want to have a reword for all the hard work you done? Well I think we should by have a class party.
    My first resin on why we should have a class party is that in class we do a lot of hard work every day and we not get a big reword like a class party so that why we should a class party at the end of this term to calibrate the hard work we have done.
    My second resin is that some people do out stang work like commenting on the blog every time with care that deserves to be reword with a big reword not a reword like a prize out a of a prize box we need a better prize like a class party.
    My last and final resin is that we should be reworded with a class party because we haven’t be reworded for all the hard work we did for all the terms and I think this is the term we should get a class party and just enjoy the day of us having a class party
    Conclusion
    We deserve a class party because we have worked hard all this terms and we deserve a reword, a brake from work to calibrate all the hard work we have done and if we have a class party we just might improve for the next term and get another.
    Author: Guguei
    5/6A

  7. Introduction: Us kids have been pushing our selves to the limit and doing all the work you throw at us.We put a lot of effort in our work and we always give it 100%. But how about some recognition and some appreciation to what we do at school.

    Argument #1:
    We deserve the class party because of the focus and co-operation within our classroom.We are a well communicated classroom and we all get a long greatly.We would all like to get along and interact at the class party and to get a closer bond Friendships in the classroom will get bigger and stronger once we are in enjoying ourselves at the class party.I personally think that having a class party to celebrate what we have achieved so far in the year is a really cool thing to do!

    Argument #2:
    Mr Andrew! You push us kids to the best that we can do and I appreciate that. Everyday we get new tasks to do and new things to learn about. You spend quality times teaching us and guide us so when we grow up we can be a doctor, or an engineer. Us kids have big dreams and you put your into teaching us. Wouldn’t you like to look back and see us kids reflect about what we have learnt thing year?

    Argument #3: Mr Andrew this might be the only time to actually socialize with the grade and the year sixes we might only see them for the rest of the year so i think that was should spend the most amount of time together and have a good time.

    So that is why i think that we should have a class party and enjoy the rest of the year while we can.

    Author: Loki

  8. Mr Andrew, My homework is on the Liddiard road computers and I don’t know when I can finish it besides at homework classes.
    Can I finish it at homework classes tomorrow?

  9. Should we have a class party?
    My opinion on having a class party is that we should because I think that we should be able to have fun in primary school and in high school we could talk about how much we learned in Liddiard road and we could talk about how fun the school was, convincing other people’s siblings to come to liddiard road.

    My first opinion on having a class party is that we should be able to have a class party to celebrate all the times that we have worked in school and to celebrate how hard we have worked in the classroom throughout the year. I think that if we have a class party, we can go back in the future and talk about how fun liddiard road is and how much education has been taught to us by the teachers. We could always talk about how kind the teachers are and how much they help us through our tough work. I think that if you gave us a class party near the end of term three, we would be as excited as a homeless person being given a long piece of a bread stick.

    My second opinion is that if you give us a class party, I would try to let the classroom to lose points on the board and I will try not to talk when I am working unless it is for a great cause like talking to the teacher, asking a question or helping someone. I think that we should have a class party because we are the only grade in the senior unit that has not got given a class party yet and I want to at least have one class party this year.

    My last opinions about class parties are that if we got a class party this year we would have at least one rest because the rest of the year all we have done is work and we haven’t had one chance to have a rest for one day, watch a movie and eat food. I also think that if we get given a class party then it would make us much better as students being my thought. I think that having a class party would be really great for the class room because everyone wants to have a class party but you just need a persuasive piece so you get persuaded to change your idea on having a class party.

    In conclusion I think that we should have a class party after all because we haven’t had one yet and we need to have one day to have one day with our minds off of work. We could also improve our noise level if you give us a chance to wear casual cloths and have a day off working.

    Author: Nyetap Ruach

  10. Introduction- Most kids have wanted to have a class party. We deserve to have a class party because we have tried our best in our work and at least get a rest for a couple of hours. If we just keep on doing boring old work and have no fun, then no-body will end up coming to school, and our days will be horrible.

    1st Argument-I strongly believe that we should have a class party because we are waiting for a reward of showing our amazing behaviour, and how good we can work with a different teacher or different students. When we go to high school or another school, I’m sure you would want us to talk about something interesting at our school, and who the best teacher is. People may think bad about our school but not when we have something enjoyable to do.

    2nd Argument-Nearly every class in the whole unit has had a class party, except for us. We are showing our best we can do while working and hopefully improving our behaviour. If you gave us a class party we would be that excited because it’s never happened this year and we definitely deserve one for our magnificent work! What if no-one knows how to eat! That could either be a new experience for me and others in the class. This may only be the time we could socialize with the grade sixes if we have a class party.

    3rd Argument- Do you want all of us soon slacking of our work because we have had no break? I strongly believe that we should have a class party because it would be great to see some time off work and some time for eating. Not being rewarded can make us sad and sometime there will be no people at our school and no-one to be taught, which teachers will be fired. If you were a child and you did nothing fun in class time would you be angry?

    Conclusion- Are you angry about you child having no fun during class time, lunch or snack? If you are that’s because we hardly get a break off work and always have our heads shot down working as hard as we possibly can. That’s why we should have a break off work.

    By Tahlia

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