Jay’s 100 Word Challenge – The Fish

Unknown Creature

On a beautiful, bright and gleaming summer’s day, when the shining sun beamed in my smiling, joyful face, I was stunningly horrified as a monstrous beast suddenly appeared from nowhere.
The chill of fear tingles through my bones. All I could see was an approaching red, fat and jagged tooth beast. My friend is screaming in madness as he glares at this weird worm-looking fish. The fish looks into my bulging eyes and opens its wide and massive mouth. The creature then sinks its razor sharp teeth into my arm! The bite felt like 500 bees stinging me at once. What do I do?

Author: Jay Muscat

2 thoughts on “Jay’s 100 Word Challenge – The Fish

  1. To Jay
    Wow! What a suspense-filled piece of writing!
    I really like how you describe your setting. The words you use are effective in painting a picture in the readers mind of where you are and how your characters are feeling.
    Keep up the great writing!
    From Mrs Natusch
    Team 100WC

  2. Wow, I found this after 6 years and it brings back so many memories. Thankyou for such a wonderful experience at Liddiard Road 🙂

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