100 Word Challenge

Welcome back for our last term of the year. Here is our first 100 word challenge of the term. During term 3 you all wrote amazing short pieces of writing and our challenge should be to improve further.

Here is a message from the 100 word challenge team with this weeks prompt.

I do lots of thinking in my study sat at my PC. This morning as I was thinking what prompt to set you, a hot air balloon floated across the roof tops opposite. Here in Bristol, we are known for our balloon flying so I have used that as inspiration for this week’s prompt:

…looking down, I was surprised to see…

Really get your imaginations working!

17 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge

  1. On a windy, foggy and horrible morning, when the awful weather terribly roared all over the wet and miserable paddocks, I was gliding in a colourful and relaxing hot air balloon, while sadly thinking about this dangerous and disappointing weather.
    Suddenly, I heard frightening screams. Terror spread all over the town below. I was curiously wondering what was happening. I was surprised to see a giant tsunami tear through the city, destructing and smashing buildings everywhere. I was as feared as a prey being viciously attacked by furious predators. Suddenly, the ground was coming closer and closer. There was a massive hole in the balloon!

    1. On a windy, foggy and horrible morning, when the awful weather terribly roared all over the wet and miserable paddocks, I was gliding in a colourful and relaxing hot air balloon, while sadly thinking about this dangerous and disappointing weather.
      Suddenly, I heard frightening screams. Terror spread all over the town below. I was curiously wondering what was happening. Looking down, I was surprised to see a giant tsunami tear through the city, destructing and smashing buildings everywhere. I was as feared as a prey being viciously attacked by furious predators. Suddenly, the ground was coming closer and closer. There was a massive hole in the balloon

  2. One dark breezy night, when the trees were swaying softly and the wind was as light as a feather, I was at a carnival celebrating Australia Day. There were hundreds of rides such as the hot air balloon. I decided I wanted to go onto it so they put me into a basket and I was up and flying. I was flying up for five minutes. Looking down, I was surprised to see fireworks exploding and spreading like clusters. It was time to go down but I could feel the balloon shaking wildly I took a quick peek and I was falling.

    Author: Travis

  3. During the early day I went to see what it would be like to go on a hot air balloon so I did. I feel excited, shocked, amazed and happy that I can see places I have never seen before. I am also worried. It is cool up here. I can see other towns from here. I will go on one again. My family will love this when I tell them. I think I can see my house from here. I see I was surprised to see a magnificent football games and farms wonderful animals and cool cars. I hear the boiling flame taking us up.
    Author: Cody

  4. The Vicious dog
    On a stunning brilliant day, my awesome and fabulous father and I decided to rent a nice bright vivid hot air balloon. We are super excited because we get to go hundreds of feet into the air and we get to feel the air rushing past us up which lots of people don’t get to do every day. The breeze up this high is warm and gentle. I can taste the warm salty air crawling into my mouth. The sun feels heavenly as we climb higher. Looking down I am surprised to see a vicious dog appear and he bears his teeth at us ready to attack.
    Author: Logan Flynn of 5/6 A

  5. Title: Look Out
    During one stunning summer’s day, my incredibly handsome father and I, relaxing in a massive hot air balloon, looking over the ginormous city that I live in. Gargantuan sized birds are flapping their wings as they are flying past us as we are in the massive hot air balloon. I decided to look down at what amazing things we are going over, looking down, I was surprised to see the city getting closer and closer every speedy second. I have 2 crazy thoughts going through my magnificent head and those thoughts were why are we getting closer to the ground? And WE’RE GOING TO DIE.
    Author: Reece W

  6. THE MASSIVE TSUNAMI
    One dark afternoon, when the huge clouds where grey and the wind were strong I went in a giant amazing hot air balloon, excited to see of my wonderful home town. Looking down I was surprised to see a massive Vicious Tsunami people were running like crazy. People were screaming louder than a stunned one direction fan screaming for them. I wonder if someone will they okay. I started to worry if any will make it. I’m glad I’m not down there but I still wonder if everyone is okay. What’s happening…?
    Author: Chloe Holmes

  7. 100WC
    On one marvellous morning as the sun was shining brightly, I was lazily relaxing and admiring the beautiful city view. I finally got used to the sound of the fire bursting out keeping the hot air balloon air-born. I slowly start to hear a strange ringing noise continuously for multiple minute becoming louder and louder. I hear a loud roar, looking down I was surprised to see a giant sink-hole like thing emerging from out of nowhere. Almost like a black hole. I rub my eyes in shock. Hundreds of buildings and houses are being sucked into thin air… What’s happening?

  8. The spookiest woods in the land
    On the warm summer’s day, when everyone was betting on their balloon to win, I was excited to lose my family once again. So we went dashing divinely. I take the lead in the world’s biggest event in history. As I pass the divine paddocks I start to see the spookiest woods in the land. Then suddenly I heard a voice. I decided to land, and investigate the woods. As I waked down the path I see a deflating house I start to get confused. I started to see wicked witches. I ran rapidly, I jumped in the balloon and when I got in to town looking down, I was surprised to see……
    By Brittney

  9. The Terrible balloon ride
    As the sun was shining, the birds were chirping and the trees were swaying. The balloon began to lift up into the blue sky. As I got up into the clouds the view of the city was amazingly beautiful. When I was looking around I could see the ground getting closer and closer. Looking down I was surprised to see people screaming in horror as if there was something happening. I couldn’t believe it; the balloon was falling down because of a gigantic hole in the balloon. All I could see was a bright light and then pitch black.
    Author: Nyetap

  10. One great afternoon I walked outside to see how the weather was today because I was excited to be going fishing. When I saw big flying balloons I changed my mind about going fishing because I saw big wonderful colourful flying balloons flying around. I said to my family,” The weather looks cold. Can we just go on the flying balloon?” When we went we asked the balloon people “How much does your balloon cost?” They tell us it was $50 and we went inside the flying balloon and man told us to haul ourselves into the basket. When we start flying away the weather turned terrible and we told the flying balloon man that we wanted to get down because the weather is terrible and we are all frightened.
    Author: Dynamo L.R

  11. …looking down I was surprised to see…
    I was surprised to see hundreds and thousands of people they were in Spain and there were some people running there’s some bull’s I am thinking… are they crazy there going to get there self-killed I yell but nothing I see a bull behind one of them but then he disappeared he didn’t run to the side he vanished .I was going too vomited but then he got stood on but before he did he vanished again.it happened in the afternoon, when the sun was bright and then wind was flowing, I stopped in the sun and looking down under…YAY…I was in an air balloon.
    Authored by Louise!

  12. The Life Threatening Balloon Ride.
    As I floated around in the incredibly large hot air balloon, looking down I was surprised to see an oversized tornado beyond the horizon getting closer and closer. It was travelling extremely fast. I started to panic knowing there’s no way out because of how high I was from the ground. I could see the tornado wiping out everything in its path. The closer we go to the ground the closer the tornado got. By the time we hit the ground the tornado sucked up the hot air balloon. But I made it out before the hot air balloon was in the tornado. I felt so flabbergasted that I wasted my money for this.
    Author: Guguei

  13. The hot air balloon
    During the early day I went to see what it would be like to go on a hot air balloon, so I did. I felt excited, shocked, amazed and happy that I could see places I have never seen before. I was also worried. It was cool up there. I could see other towns from there. I will go on one again. My family will love this when I tell them. I think I could see my house from there. I was surprised to see a magnificent football game and farms with wonderful animals and cool cars. I could hear the boiling flame taking us up.
    Author: Cody

  14. The Lonely troll
    In the bright sunny morning when the beautiful birds were singing, I walked outside to see a giant hot air balloon! There was a crazy, weird man in front of it asking if anyone wanted to have a MAGNIFICENT ride. So I walked up to the man and he says, “It’s 5 dollars!” So I pay the man 5 dollars and he takes me for a ride. I walked over to the edge. Looking down I was amazed to see a huge troll all alone crying. The strange man said,” We are going to land here.” I ignore him and still continue thinking about the hideous troll.
    Author: Loki

  15. The Giant Balloon
    I get out of bed at 6:30 in the morning. It was finally Saturday, a bright sunny day. I’m so excited to be going to the park. I get dressed and off we go. When we get to the park I raced excitedly out of the car. I ran to the hot air balloon and we climbed into the huge basket. The man lit the fire up. We were in the air looking down. Suddenly, I saw my best friend Frank. I kept looking down I was surprised to see my dad’s best mate, Glen, he was repairing his car.
    Author: Jamie

  16. The Revenge of the Ginormous Snake!
    One sunny morning, when the baby birds where singing, I walked outside of my amazing house and saw army men jumping out of trees and bushes trying to shot each other. I think there is another war on this beautiful day, so I jumped in the hot-air-balloon and flow away. Looking down, I was surprised to see a ginormous 50k long snake slithering towards the war, so I flow back down and jumped out of the hot-air-balloon. People are screaming in fear as the snake arrived. I hoped into the tank, took one shot and……to be continued DUN DUN DUNNNNN.
    Author: Shani

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