Look and learn

The AFL season for 2014 has just begun this weekend.

Look and learn

Describe what is happening in the image.

Choose one of the following and complete a snapshot piece of writing:

– You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?

– You are one of the supporters in the crowd. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?

14 thoughts on “Look and learn

  1. In this image, the player (Lockie Henderson) has his arm up while he is jogging around the sidelines. I think that he is possibly holding his arm up because he is happy that he has perhaps kicked a goal.

    I was running with all my might. I felt like I was about to drop asleep because I was so exhausted from today already. The deafening crowd was cheering like mad. The scent of the meat pies and sausages with tomato ketchup made me sooooo hungry. The streamers were hanging over the barrier to cheer for the Carlton FC. I was really hoping that we would win. The taste of the horrible mouthguard made me feel very uncomfortable, but I was glad that the mouthguard protected my mouth.

    1. You done a good job. You added some strong decriptive word. Next time i think you might have to expand it a bit more and put more emotive and strong words. But any way the rest was good.

  2. -Describe what is happening in the image –
    Loki Henderson has just goaled a 6 pointer for Carlton and is cheering about it because they were struggling in the game and they have won the 2nd quarter whilst playing the amazing and better team Geelong.
    -You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    I’m feeling confident and amazed because friendly team helped me score a goal! Were now winning the 2nd Quarter and I can hear the crowd cheering a girl in the crowd just took a photo of me maybe she’s uploading it to Instagram #CarltonRocks I feel like I can fly my first goal of the season! I can feel the streamers running across my leg, we win profusely! I’m hungry I’ll go have a meat pie now.

    – You are one of the supporters in the crowd. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    My Team just scored it was Loki Henderson’s first goal of the season! I am hearing all of the other people cheering and being arrogant to the Geelong supporters Loki’s jumped up in the air just like a ballerina, he has helped our team win the 2nd Quarter.

  3. Describe what is happening in the image: That Lochie Henderson just kicked a goal and he is happier than ever. That he just kicked a goal that made them win the 4 quarter and they bet Melbourne. That the crowed is roaring and cheering for him as soon as he shows his muscular muscles in the mid-air. The crowed is screaming as they touch is hand for his talentless. He has just kicked the longest goal and he has just made the goal so everyone is so surprised. He has just made a goal and the judges mouth wide open as far a possible.
    You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling? I am thinking that they all love me and adore me now that I have just made like just made it. I am feeling so proud and appreciate because they are all cheering and pom poms are going everywhere. I am thinking that we are going to win because we just won the 4 quarter. I can see pom poms going everywhere in the air with little streams coming out from them. I can see people cheering yelling with their red rosy cheeks. I can see food going up in the air. I can also see people jumping up and down in the air. I can smell cooked pies with the yummy steaming meat. I can smell cooked hot dogs and corn dogs cook and on a stick. I can smell French fries grizzling in the pan. I can hear people screaming yay. I can hear the pom poms shaking in the air. I can hear the Frenchs fries grizzling on the pan. I can hear people babies crying and lots of laughter. I can hear lots of people yelling screaming shouting and talking. I am feeling so proud of myself because I have just made everyone latterly stand up and bowl. I am feeling really loved because even my team mate are so happy and they are just about to give me high fives and big man hugs. I am feeling really surprise because I did not even know I was going to make it. I am feeling really happy because everyone is applauding for me.

  4. Describe what is happening in the image.
    A Carlton football player just kicks a goal and the crowd is going wild watching the epic replay of the player kicking the goal as he runs around the side lines putting his arm up cheering for himself. The entire oval coved in players from the game. The crowd filling giant wigs everywhere like they kick the winning goal.
    You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    I think the goal will get us close to the score I hope. I see so many people standing up from their seats yelling Carlton. I smell all of the delicious food the crowd I’m incurable hungry my tummy is glaring at me. All of the crowd sound crazy and yelling in my ear it starts to ring its annoying. I feel the sweat drip down my body, my whole body well just my feet hurt I want an ice bath after this match I feel cool playing football/AFL.

  5. I’m going around the field and I have got the big muscly arms up and he is cheering for my team because I have just won the game and I can see the people that are cheering for the team that has won the game. I wonder if the other team came close to the team that won. I also wonder if the other team was cheering for me when I won or they had their faces dawn and they were saying” I WISH WE WOULD OF WON AND THEY WOULD OF LOST”.

    I felt like I was the champion and I didn’t let my team down and I won just for my team and then I thought to myself will I make it through to the next round and will I defeat the other team that I compete against. I wondered to myself will I break any of my body parts and I won’t be able to compete my enemy and they will win and I just let my team down just because I had a broken lip and I said to myself I can go out there and I can WIN!!!!.
    I can smell all of the tasty food that everyone is eating. I can hear all of the people cheering for all my team. I am egsasted because I am out thier and I am nealy finished.

  6. Describe what is happening in the image.
    I can see a really bad football team player on the field pumping his fist because he has most likely kicked a goal…FLUKE! All the Carlton supporters are cheering on this horrible player for kicking a goal. I DON’T KNOW WHY? I can also see his horrible blue and white jumper to represent such a bad team. There is one person who is in the crowd, who is a Carlton supporter, who looks like he has got a V.I.P pass or something around his neck. I can see massive pom-poms over the barrier that look like someone’s long blue and white hair.

    – You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    As I kick the most beautiful goal in the history of A.F.L I run up the sidelines as fast as I could. I was like a cheetah. As I am running I think to myself, could that satisfying goal win the best goal of the year award? I forget about that and begin to look towards all my beautiful Carton supporters. I can see one right up the front screaming his head off like crazy. It was deafening like a lion after losing one of the tastiest meals of the savannah. When I look at him it looks like he has a V.I.P pass or something around his neck. A couple of seconds later these ginormous pom-poms pop right out into my face. They were like massive bits of blue and white hair all on a stick being shaken around. Suddenly, I smell the beautiful aroma of meat pies, hot salty chips, hotdogs, beer and many more delicious scents. I begin to feel an immense amount of hunger. So I just run away from that and ignore the smell so I don’t feel hungry anymore. A couple of minutes later I nearly jump out of my socks because of all the people screaming like wild dogs. I think, “If they are yelling and cheering like this, I must be a really good inspiration towards them”. I begin to feel really proud of myself and decide to pump my fist and show my incredibly large muscles. I feel a bucket load of sweat come down my forehead and into my mouth, DISGUSTING! I feel so amazed with myself and decide to cheer with the crowd.

    Author: Tristan Platt

  7. Describe what is happening in the image
    He kicked an amazing goal from the forward pocket what put them five goals behind. He was also proud that he got an exciting goal because they were versing the best and amazing team Essendon that was the best on the day. He felt like it wasn’t enough because Essendon fought back again and got the most fantastic goal for that season. They won.
    Choose one of the following and complete a snapshot piece of writing:
    I’m running across the ground profusely trying to get a goal it was really hard because there was an amazing defence by Essendon somehow I ended up on the sideline I’m feeling like this is our chance to catch up I was devastated how I kicked the ball. I was Lucky that there was a lot of wind that day so it slowly curved and went straight thought the goals. I felt good because we had the numbers. I see my beautiful supporters cheer for us it felt the best. While I was looking around I smelt an great smell I thought it was a pie until I went around a little bit more when I see a hotdog. I smile to my fanes then go back into the game for a feisty game ahead.
    – You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?

  8. Lachie Henderson is happy in the picture the crowd is roaring like a lion because I think Lachie Henderson just kicked a goal. The people at the back of the goal are throwing the pom poms up and down behind the barrio. Lachie Henderson is sweating profusely but he is so happy the crowd is so happy.
    I’m so happy that I just kicked a goal I can smell the sweat dribbling down my face and I can smell delicious meat pies right now I could die for one of them I and can smell hot chips and hotdogs boy what I wouldn’t do for some think hot . I can see the crowed go wild as I kick the goal I’m so amazed I feel courage as I kicked the goal I hear the crowd rowing when I run around the barrier.

  9. Describe what is happening in the image.
    I see a player running down the side line in happiness . There are pompoms down the side line.
    I see the people waving their blue and white pompoms everywhere and I saw some people eating hot dogs and some pizza and popcorn. I smell the sweat and the muddy field and some people are very upset they even through away their Essendon T shirts.

    – You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    I am happy because I just scored the winning goal against Essendon. I am so happy I scored that goal because we were competing in the grand finally I saw my cousins and family cheering for me. It is the first time they have lost because they kept winning profusely. The crowd was profusely cheer for me and the team .

    BY: DENG G


  10. Describe what is happening in the image.
    In this photograph it looks like Lachie Henderson just scored a goal and a lot of people are cheering him “GO LACHY HENDERSON YOU RULE!” While the Carlton supporters are cheering him on. All the Carlton supporters were waving their flags, hanging pompoms over the boundary barriers and holding up large signs that read “GO CARLTON WE RULE THE GROUNDS!!!!!!” While the Carlton supporters clapped and cheered the Melbourne supporters were just slumped down in their chairs acting like it’s over and they’re not going to win the preliminary final. They all looked dark and gloomy as a stormy sky in the mid-day.

    You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?

    I’m thinking “YES, GO CARLTON!!” we have won the preliminary final for 2014. While I’m running around the field I can see thousands of supporters all around the field giving me a standing ovation, they are so proud of me. I can smell so much beer, from every point of the field. I could hear people talking about how good Carlton is, they’re going to win the preliminary final and take home the winning trophy. The Melbourne supporters look as gloomy as ever.
    Author: Mahnee
    

  11. Describe what is happening in the image
    I can see a Carlton player running along the side line with he’s fist in the air. I can see people in the background cheering with their pompons when he goes’ pasted.

    You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    The crewed is roaring profusely because I just kicked an awesome goal I am feeling so proud of myself I am going to make are team win tonight. I can feel myself sweating profusely.

    You are one of the supporters in the crowd. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    I am feeling so proud of Lachie Henderson because he has kicked a goal in. I am thinking where going to win tonight the other team can’t beat us there horrible. I can hear the people cheering for their team as Lachie Henderson is running along the sideline. I can smell the dishes smell of the yummy food as the food sellers came pasted me.

  12. Describe what is happening in the image.

    In the picture Lachie Henderson won a the game and he got to run around the boundary on the oval hi-fiving everyone while running around the boundary and everyone is standing up and cheering and big giant blue and white pompom’s waving over the boundary.
    Choose one of the following and complete a snapshot piece of writing:

    – You are one of the supporters in the crowd. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?

    On the big day of the grand final Carlton won. I am feeling so supportive by cheering for my team and hearing loud cheering and screaming seeing lots and lots of fans/supporters here today. I smell pies with tomato sauce and hot dogs and I’m thinking oh I hope my team is going to win because we had no injuries yet and got the best players on the filed today.

    Author- Abby

  13. Describe what is happening in the image. The talented man, Lachie Henderson maybe kicked a humongous GOAL. Lachie Henderson had sweat racing down his face like an ice-cream dripping on the ground. Choose one of the following and complete a snapshot piece of writing: LACHIE HENDERSON and the crowd.
    – You are the player running past the sideline. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling? I can hear the crowd roaring like a pack of LIONS. I can smell junk food cooking in the canteen and the beautiful smell in the air. I can see one of the talented people kicking the football through the GOALS. I can feel the sweat coming across my body and I can feel my heart pounding!
    – You are one of the supporters in the crowd. What are you thinking, seeing, smelling, hearing and feeling?
    I’m thinking that the supporter’s team will win this game. I can see the entire beautiful crowd cheering for them. I could smell the delicious food in the canteen. I could hear all the people in the crowd screaming to the people playing footy. I could feel the sweat in my clothes and it running down on my face.

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