Week 3 Homework – Persuasive Writing

For this week’s homework you are going to write a persuasive piece of writing on, ‘The City or The Country.’

– Your writing should also include lots of strong words words such as emotive words that will engage readers.

– Make sure you read your writing before posting. You may be able to put this piece of writing in your writers’ gift.

12 thoughts on “Week 3 Homework – Persuasive Writing

  1. CITY OR COUNTRY!

    Most people would believe that living in the city is extremely better than living in the country. Do you believe this statement? I definitely don’t agree with this. Some of the following reasons are why I do recommend the country better than the city.

    If you agree with me and others that the country is better than the city, I’m sure you would never regret it because in the city there is an immense amount of horrible looking graffiti all through the street walls. This is shocking. I think it is shocking because the city walls are meant to be clean, but they are being trashed by young teens who think they are the best. IT’S NOT GOOD AT ALL!!!

    Only a fool would think that the city is way better than the country because in the country, you can do absolutely anything you want! You can light little fires, rides bikes without helmets (not safe at all), chop down trees for more land, climb any tree you want and a lot more wonderful things. But, in the city you can’t do many of the things you can do in the country. I personally believe that the country is incredibly better for you to have fun at.

    We ALL know that the country is better than the city because you don’t really have to pay for a lot of things other than the food and electricity bills. With the electricity bills, you don’t really have to pay for it because most country people are always outside enjoying themselves. For the food, all you have to do is buy the correct plants and grow your own supermarket. AMAZING!!!

    In a conclusion of this fine piece of work, I say that the country is a lot better than living in a boring old city with ugly graffiti and nothing to do! Thank you all for listening.

    Author: Tristan Platt

  2. CITY OR COUNTRYS

    I THINK THE COUNTRY IS BETTER THAN THE CITY BECAUSE LETS SAY LIKE MELBOURNE IS A CITY AND TRARALGON IS A COUNTRY TOWN. IN A CITY LIKE MELBOURNE IT IS REALLY CROWDED BUT IN A COUNTRY TOWN LIKE TRARALGON HAS A LOT MORE GREENERY AND LOTS OF PARKS. IF I LIVED IN A CITY RIGHT NOW I WOULD FEEL SO FRUSTRATED BECAUSE OF ALL OF THE CROWDS AND NOT AS MUCH GREEN MOSTLY JUST GRAY. I DON’T THINK ANY ONE WOULD PICK A CITY OVER A COUNTRY TOWN BECAUSE THEY ARE SO MUCH MORE REALAXING THAN CITYS.

    I THINK COUNTRY TOWNS ARE BETTER BECAUSE THERE IS NOT AS MUCH CRIME THAN IN A CITY. We ALL KNOW THAT THE COUNTRY IS BETTER THAN THE CITY BECAUSE YOU DON’T REALLY HAVE TO PAY FOR A LOT OF THINGS LIKE FOOD. THAT IS A LOT CHEAPER IN A COUNTRY TOWN BECAUSE IN A CITY THERE ARE A LOT OF PEOPLE SO THEY WILL HAVE TO PAY FOR SOME THING SOONER OR LATER. THAT’S WHY THEY MAKE IT COST SO MUCH.

  3. The city and the country are both great places. I believe the country is better.
    Firstly living in the country is way better than the city because the country has more fresh air than the city does. In the city the air is polluted. The air in the country is clean because there are more trees and less machinery.

    Houses are more expensive in the city than in the country so you wouldn’t have a big house in the city. In the country you could afford a bigger, newer house.
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    Secondly there is a lot of traffic in the city so you could be late to school. You wouldn’t have to go through that much traffic and would be on time to school in the country.

    Kids can spot lots of animals and nature in the country instead of just seeing buildings.

    There is more crime in the city than in the country. In the city it is more dangerous for kids to walk to school or parks. In the country there is less crime so kids can be safe and walk to their friends house.

    I think there are more reasons to like the city

  4. Kid should normally be out and about instead of busy crowded place. In big space area not in small areas.

    I strongly believe that countries are better than city’s because countries are more out and about. I believe in countries you can learn more outside.

    I in fact in countries you can go out hunting, camping and fishing and more stuff. I agree in countries you can go on any adventures. Also you can learn more about wildlife.

    I strongly disagree that cities are better than country’s because in city’s they are way too crowed and in countries that are quiet and calm. Also there are too much busy roads and it is just packed.

    I think countries are better because they are more open. I think countries are better than city’s because cities are not that open.

    I strongly agree that countries are better than city’s because cities are too squashed up and everything else is happening at the same time. In the country things just happen individually.

    I think countries are better because they are just out more so you can learn more stuff such as. Shotting, hunting and making camp fires.

    Kids should be out and about in big spaces learning more stuff and out in the wild life

  5. Would you live in the Country or the city? I strongly believe that the city is better than the country. because in the city they have big shopping moles and in the country they don’t.
    The city has beautiful views of the buildings and in the country they don’t even have big buildings. The city has apartments and the country. You can get better jobs in the city and in the country.
    Sorry mr andrews I don’t have a lot home work classes is finished

  6. The City or The Country?

    Do you want to live in a massive city with smelly allyways and messy front yards? This is why I think the country life is much better than city life.

    Firstly, living in the country is way better than the city because most countries have fresh air instead of dirty and polluted air. In the city there is more cars and all of the pollution would fill the air with the disgusting smell.

    Secondly, in the city there is so much traffic and most of the time you would be very late for school because there will be traffic jams everywhere. In the country there is alot less traffic so then you wouldn’t be late for school if you lived in the country.

    Thirdly, in the country there is lots of things for you kids to spot such as animals and naturelike tree and green grass. The only things that you’ll be able to spot is buildings. Do you want to just stare at plain, old boring buildings?

    Forthly, in the city there is more crimes than in the country.If you want to live in the city then listen to this, it is more dangerous for kids to walk to their school or to the local park. But in the country there is less crimes so your kids can be safe while walking to their school or parks.

    This is why I think the country is better than the city.

  7. The countryside? It must be nice if you’re retired … or dead. If you want to have an amazing social life and like to do wild crazy things like going to the cinema, the city is for you.

    Did you know that most people that live in the country have low paid jobs? You’ll get paid for Farming but not enough, its better to live in the city for this case, higher pays as maybe a Layer or a Teacher will get you a better lifestyle.

    Can anyone here go at lest one week without going on Facebook, Instagram, Kik, Snapchat etc? Nope I cant, Wi-Fi is one of the main things you need to use the internet and the country would be out of signal or low range

    Public transport makes you feel like you’re part of the world: you and others are on the same boat, so to speak, taking time to pause and read, or listen to music, before reaching work or going home. Kids who annoy you by listening to rap music in the bus? They share your space, too. And you, theirs. It’s imperfect which, no matter its many drawbacks, seems to work. Almost like magic.

    There’s a reason Melbourners are considered to be the annoying people on earth: nothing matters them, because no one has time to be fazed and they’ve seen it all anyway. Someone is rude to on the subway? Move along cities teach patience and empathy because, after all, you’re all in this together.

    That is why the city Is better than the country, and why you should live there instead or the country!

  8. Do you believe the city is better then the country well you’re wrong the country is better then the city. These three agreements are going to show you that the country is better then the city.

    There’s less traffic in the country then the city because there is less people that use vehicles in the country then the city because there’s less people in the city.

    Most schools in the city are private unlike some schools in the country because there’s a lot of parents that want there kids to learn a lot of things and you need a lot of schools so you can fit all the kids in the city.

    There’s less space in the city because the city has a lot of buildings then the country has fields that has houses, farm animals, backyards that have about 50 meters of area and the last thing is bush land.

    So that’s why I believe that the country is better then the city so I hope by reading this you would live in the country then the city. So thanks for reading this.

  9. City or country I think that City is better than country City has lots of places to go like hotels if people don’t have homes. or there friends houses but in countries they don’t have that In a country.

    Firstly City is better because it has lots of famous people that live there so instead if your in another country and you want to go visit a famous rapper you would have travel around the world to visit and that’s wasting your money because to get in a plane is 5000$ and you need your passport so if you dropped in on your way you would have to go back.

    Secondly social media is mostly in city’s and with out social media in cites it would be so boring and if your going on trip to somewhere on camp you would mostly to a city and that’s right have you ever dreamed about going to America because it has so much stuff over there and famous rapper while guess what that’s a city yeah so that’s why City is better.

    Thirdly City is better most of your tv episodes are over their and you love your tv episodes with out it would be nothin to you that’s why you go to the city and watch millions of it and if your not a fan of tv there’s sport heaps of sport that dint know where they where like basketball cricket footy soccer and other sports that’s city is better than country.

    Conclusion I strongly believe a city is better than country.

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