Mahnee’s 100 Word Challenge – …but it is yellow…

During the pleasant afternoon, as the shoppers move in and out of the shops, Jayde, Mouse and I were desperately looking for gorgeous red dresses for Mouses hens’ night. We stumbled upon a shop called Michelle’s. There were thousands of the most beautiful dresses hanging on the racks. I’m feeling so excited. The dressing room doors were as squeaky as a small grey mouse scurrying around a house. I suddenly spotted the most wonderful red dress. “Can I try this on?” I looked at my reflection in the mirrors. It looks marvellous and it feels wonderful. But it is yellow.

One thought on “Mahnee’s 100 Word Challenge – …but it is yellow…

  1. Hi Mahnee. I love your 100WC! You have used words imaginatively and creatively, and your writing flows clearly. I especially like how you have also described how the dress feels. Well done, keep up the excellent writing!

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