100 Word Challenge

Last term we worked hard on trying to use powerful language to improve our writing. To begin this term, we will complete some 100 word challenges to practise our writing and use of descriptive language.

Today we will use the following prompt and images to unpack a seed in preparation for a 100 word challenge peice of writing. In your seed use 4 senses and think about using emotive words, synonyms, adjectives and similes.

… the ferocious wind…

10 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge

  1. The Ferocious Wind
    One freezing night a storm stirred. By morning the storm grew more aggressive until a building fell right next to my house. The ferocious wind started shattering my windows and ripped my roof off. Someone shouted, “Get to the bunker”! I tried to run to the bunker but the ferocious wind pushed me back and a tree broke my foot I started to feel terrified. Luckily someone saw me and helped me in the bunker will I survive?
    By Malachi

  2. 15/06/2015
    …The Ferocious Wind…
    By Tyson Gill

    During the incredible afternoon, their was a terrible outbreak of thick wind that was taking over the city. I take a squiz out my glass window, to find a harmful, dangerous, dust storm, as big as planet earth!

    I start to worry if this wind took over earth? What would we do for survival? The first thing, my bulging eyes could see, was the ferocious wind overcoming all the roads and footpaths. It was as dirty as mud.

    People are running and screaming at the same time. Oh, how much horror their is. I feel absolutely petrified!

    I don’t even know how many butterflies are in my stomach.

  3. During the warm morning, I heard a loud bang. I got up and there was no more buildings left they had bin dismantle. I was terrified I tried to wake up mum and dad but they were fast asleep. The ferocious wind did this. I could see the wind there was a whistle wind going through my home and I wonder if the people were alright. Some of the buildings were half shattered and our house was collapsing on top of us. Mum and dad got up and we ran for it. The ground was shaking like an earthquake. The strong wind almost blew us over.

    By Aslan
    3/4A
    The ferocious wind.

  4. On a shivering freezing cold day there was a ferocious chaotic wind. It was as loud as a lion roaring, I was so petrified I was worried for my life. The wind was stronger as the strongest man in the world. I ran down the streets and could see terrified people . Revolting ash,disgusting water and dust all went into my mouth. I observe petrified people and aggressive hard winds. I was wondering when will it stop? I went to hide thinking who did this? I wonder what it is?
    I wonder how this ginormous wind got here.

    1. The ferocious wind On a shivering freezing cold day there was a ferocious chaotic wind. It was as loud as a lion roaring. I was so petrified I was worried for my life. The wind was stronger than the strongest man in the world. I ran down the streets and could see terrified people . Revolting ash, disgusting water and dust all went into my mouth. I observe petrified people and aggressive hard winds. I was wondering when will it stop? I went to hide thinking who did this? I wonder what it is?
      I wonder how this ginormous wind got here? When it came I called it the ferocious wind.

      by Vincent

  5. The Ferocious wind
    The wind is not good and it’s going to take me away. I could feel the wind and it is so freezing. I could see the raging wind destroying trees and the houses. I can see the waves coming in on the road and a truck had been blown over. I hear the wind whistling.The wind was strong like a giant pulling something.

    By Ruot

  6. The ferocious wind
    One morning I saw a humongous Storm .When something like that happens I always hide under my bed .Once it is done I go out side and look at what has happened
    I hear trees blowing. i hear kids screaming and loud rain I hear branches smashing I am in bed looking out side the window I see a boat crashing cars crashing as well birds in the tree. I feel the wind on my hands I feel the cold breeze I wonder if anyone is out side Charlie

  7. The Ferocious Wind
    During the freezing afternoon, I stare at the sky looking petrified. I wouldn’t have dreamt of this day. Dismantled buildings lay scattered on the streets. Trees were being ripped out of the ground as if a giant was giving us chaos. The gust was almost as powerful as a shark attack. I could hear the ferocious wind as if flows by my face. The whistling wind gives me the shivers as it travels down the road. I walk down the path way I could see a dust cloud as ginormous as a mansion. Will I survive or will I die.
    By Anna

  8. The ferocious wind
    During the freezing spooky afternoon, I was in my normal house until I saw the biggest outbreak of wind, ripping every little tree out of the ground. The waves were louder than they ever have been before. I wonder what is going to happen to all the cute animals. I am seeing big building crashing onto the ground. I can hear all of the cars crashing onto the shaking ground. I could feel and hear the ferocious wind. I saw really big black clouds on top of my shaking house. I wonder how long the amazing out break will continue for. Big trees continue to get ripped out and flown through the air.

    By Nanjera

  9. The Ferocious Storm
    Bang! Massive buildings are being demolished. Tall skyscrapers are being dismantled and falling with a crash! Raging winds are rapidly sprinting around. Vehicles are being thrown off the road. The freezing wind rushed past my icy cold face. Am I going to survive the ferocious storm? The wind is howling like a fearsome wolf. Rubbish is flying through the air like a flock of birds soaring amongst thick dust which made it basically impossible to breathe. The ferocious storm became stronger and more aggressive. The howling wind was ripping stuff out of the ground.
    By Anyieth!

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